Discovery Draft

Remember the Titans is the ultimate story of struggle and success. The movie is a non fictional story about the 1971 T.C. Williams football team. The movie also depicts how the community as well as the Titans football team struggled with the integration of the school, given the time period as well as the fact that a white store owner killed a young black male whom he suspected of stealing from his store. Denzel Washington plays Herman Boone, an African American football coach who was promoted to the head coaching position of the T.C. Williams football program. This promotion stirred up a lot of controversy, because Coach Boone was promoted over a hall of fame coach in Bill Yoast, played by Will Patton. When the news got out that coach Boone was an African American coach from North Carolina, who coached AA football as in comparison to AAA football, the community didn’t take a liking to him immediately, making the struggle for respect and equality that much harder.

 

Due to the fact that this movie non fictional, and set during a rough time in American history. The facts were accurate thus making the historical aspect of the movie accurate as well. I feel that if a movie, novel, and or even a news report based on an actual event doesn’t have their facts strait, the entire piece is not credible. Like giving a speech if the audience finds that the speaker is wrong about a particular aspect of their presentation, it makes it hard for them to believe the rest of their presentation. Being from the area in which the movie takes place, it’s easier for me to believe the events that were depicted in the movie, but for some one who is either from the north or the west might have trouble believing certain events that took place during the movie. An example of this would be after the Titans won a game and they were celebrating down the street with their teammate Ronnie Bass, also known as “Sunshine”, who happened to be from California. They were denied seating the restaurant because of the color of their skin. During that scene Petey tried to warn and or inform “Sunshine” that they weren’t wanted in that restaurant, and that racism is still relevant in that area as well a in that time period. “Sunshine” being from across the country in California didn’t realize that racism still took place even in that day and age.  This scene in the move does a great job of depicting history, and how it effect the lives of the characters, as well as show the time period that this movie was taking place.

 

Now, like I mentioned before about getting all of the facts is highly important, especially in a non-fictional piece. In Remember the Titans the directors and producers did in a way mislead the viewers into believing that Gerry Bertier’s football success all ceased after they won a game, and Gerry got into that dreadful accident, where he pulled out into an intersection unaware of the on coming traffic. In reality on that terrible night he was awarded the Defensive player of the year award, at their annual banquet dinner by his coaches and teammates. Unlike the movie, he was really on his way home from the banquet when his 1971 Camaro’s engine malfunctioned resulting in his paralyzing accident. This scene in the movie might have been altered for the purpose of keeping the story going, but my only question would be, why not portray the conflict in the movie exactly the way it happened in real life?

 

Another aspect of the movie that the audience might wonder would be how close are the characters in the movie, to the actual people that the actors were portraying. For the most part the actors did a great job in my opinion of depicting their real life counter parts in the movie. On the other hand some of the characters were created to help move the story along, similar to Gerry’s accident. For example the character Ray Budds, was Gerry’s selfish and racist best friend, who refused to block for his black teammate. In the movie his selfishness brought the team down as well as didn’t help them to succeed. Another example of a fictional character would be Allen Bosley the white defensive back, who gave up his spot for Petey Jones, to help them win the game. These two examples both show how dedicated and devoted to one another each of the Titans team members were. In the case of Allen he put his own pride and glory aside for the betterment of the team. Similar but different in its own way Gerry put aside his own friendship with Ray for the betterment of the team.

 

Remember the Titans an award winning film is a non fictional depiction of the 1971 T.C. Williams Titans football team. The movie does a great job of being historically correct with the events that occurred during the movie, as well as showing the unification of the team as well as the community with every win. Though the movie didn’t stay exactly on track, by portraying every aspect of the movie exactly as it happened in real life, it did do a great job of keeping the story going without giving away to the audience that they missed or changed something. In comparison to other non fictional representations of sports movies, I feel that Remember the Titans is the best because of the reasons I’ve mentioned in my critique of the movie.

 

 

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~ by 121hob on April 24, 2008.

3 Responses to “Discovery Draft”

  1. Notes for Peer’s Oral Response

    Essay # 3

    Writer Hampton O’Brien Peer Respondent Altea Shehu

    Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.

    (+) What works? (praise)

    —Summary of the film.
    —Mention of the main character and other character and mention of who the actors are.
    —Evaluation of accuracy of an actual event.

    (-) What Doesn’t (polish)
    —The credibility of the event could be more input.

    (?) Questions?
    —Why was not the movie not very accurate?
    —Maybe you can search the real reason behind that?

  2. Notes for Peer’s Oral Response

    Essay # 3

    Writer Hampton Obrian Peer Respondent : Patrice Bendig

    Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.

    (+) What works? (praise)

    The introduction goes write into the summary and describes the film well
    Points out the historical element the film has
    Relates how he is from the area where the film takes place
    Points out the flaws of the film very well

    (-) What Doesn’t (polish)
    Name the director of the film when talking about him

    (?) Questions?

  3. Essay 3: Draft 1 Progress Report

    (Please write your answers on the lines below the questions)

    Your Name _O’Brien_______________________________________ Number of words of draft 1000____

    TOPIC & THESIS: What is the object you are evaluating?

    Remember the Titans is historically correct with the time period, events that occurred, as well as the characters being accurate.

    What are the standards of value you using to make your evaluation? List here. Are these stated directly or indirectly in the draft? Explain.

    Im using history and the criteria are the time period, the events being accurately portrayed, the characters being close to the actual people.

    What is your over arching judgment of the object?

    I think that the movie is great because it is historically correct

    Is your thesis sufficiently complex to indicate the mixed feelings you may have toward the object?

    yes

    What is your thesis?

    Did you state it explicitly in the draft? (You are not required to). Why did or didn’t you put it in the draft?

    I didn’t and I felt that the my readers would be able to pick it up easily

    PURPOSE: Other than fulfilling the requirements of the assignment, what is your primary purpose in writing this essay? What do you want your readers to believe as a result of reading your essay?

    To inform my readers that history and actual events are important when depicting an actual event in either a movie or novel

    AUDIENCE: You must choose a specific publication that you are writing for. What is it? Why this publication?

    Any one who is interested in the film.

    List three ways that you have used language that would appeal to a general audience and not an audience of college students.

    DEVELOPMENT: What kinds of evidence are you using to support your judgment? Examples? Comparisons with other subjects of the same type? Expert opinions? Other?

    Expert opinions, actual facts, comparisons to other movies

    What source(s) will you list on your Works Cited page?

    The movie it self

    The ’71 titans website

    Interviews

    ORGANIZATION: ? Does your opening paragraph introduce, describe, and summarize the subject you are evaluating? Is there sufficient information for your reader who doesn’t know your subject?

    Yes it does

    On a separate sheet of paper, outline your draft. Does your outline present an argument in support of your thesis claim that follows the reasons proof pattern? Explain.

    Yes it does

    Examine your draft for transitions for each new developing paragraph. What do you need to do to make your transitions stronger?

    PRELIMINARY ASSESSMENT: What are you most pleased with in this draft? Be specific.

    I feel that I did a good job of talking about the history aspect of the movie

    List any problems you are having with this draft and write down any questions you have about the assignment or your work.

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